Patrick Story 

Patrick was at a desert he wanted to go take a cool walk and his parents told him to wear shoes but instead he was wearing some sandles. He was walking all fine but when he started walking a little more further he felt something that poked him so he started feeling the pain and he sat on the sand he was crying and saw the scorpin walking he just sat there at the sand crying and yelling his mom and they took him to the hospital and they gave him a shot so later he wasn't feeling the pain. 

Reflection: My opinion is that Patrick